Hi Justin! I liked your idea of making the butterfly a street; I thought it was unique and creative. One thing I would suggest is adding your poem so when you refer to things like the bandage and hands, your readers can look at the poem and understand what you are referring to. I also suggest that you make the bandage tag into one tag because it sounded very repetitive to keep saying and mentioning the horrible things going on throughout the ghetto. Also, why did you pick blue and yellow for the hands? Great job on your butterfly:)
Hey Justin! You did a really good job on your Butterfly Project, and I enjoyed reading about its features and characteristics. The picture that you included on your butterfly really spurred my thoughts and emotions, and just looking at those endless rows of graves really impacts viewers. I do agree with Mia when she said it would be helpful to include your poem on this blog, that way any viewers can go back and realize what you were referring to. I was also somewhat confused as to what some of the colors represented. The symbolism around aspects of your project were obviously well thought out, such as the bandaid and street, and I was impressed by the creativity behind your work. Great job!
Hi Justin! I liked your idea of making the butterfly a street; I thought it was unique and creative. One thing I would suggest is adding your poem so when you refer to things like the bandage and hands, your readers can look at the poem and understand what you are referring to. I also suggest that you make the bandage tag into one tag because it sounded very repetitive to keep saying and mentioning the horrible things going on throughout the ghetto. Also, why did you pick blue and yellow for the hands? Great job on your butterfly:)
ReplyDeleteHey Justin! You did a really good job on your Butterfly Project, and I enjoyed reading about its features and characteristics. The picture that you included on your butterfly really spurred my thoughts and emotions, and just looking at those endless rows of graves really impacts viewers. I do agree with Mia when she said it would be helpful to include your poem on this blog, that way any viewers can go back and realize what you were referring to. I was also somewhat confused as to what some of the colors represented. The symbolism around aspects of your project were obviously well thought out, such as the bandaid and street, and I was impressed by the creativity behind your work. Great job!
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